Posted on March 10, 2010.
I have to write a newsletter for my journalism course how this story make a sound? Its All Greek to me
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The beaches around me on the island of Crete, Greece. It's so laid back here and relax. There is no rush, the people here daily nap, but before their nap, they all have a great lunch. Wherever you go the scenery is impressive, towering mountains and beautiful beaches (the water is light blue). There are many historical places like ancient churches which are still used. There is also Limani (also a former port still in use) now there are restaurants seafood shops there.
It has great potential.
1. Do you go out of history.
Example: "The beaches of crushed stone around the island of Crete as a frame around a picture of relaxation."
2. See story, do not tell the story. Do not put me in the story, let me see. "A glance in any direction is an impressive vision of natural beauty, whether snow-capped mountains on the horizon or the crystal clear that disappears into the earth with every wave."
3. Try very hard never to use parentheses. This involves whispering or something that you do not want others to know. Say it aloud. owner.
Also, write "They still use an old port, called Limani Greek, lined with restaurants offering fresh seafood and shops selling art and local attractions allow visitors a chance to take a souvenir of the most even slower pace of home back exotic. "
If I have described something accurately, setting proper adjectives.
Sounds good but how is it a newsletter? Or is it a part of it?
